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MSN Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner

May 30, 2017

I am currently studying in the MSN program, Public Health track but seek to pursue the PMHNP program as I wish to serve as a pediatric psychiatric nurse. This decision has been made after much thought and arises primarily, though not entirely, through personal experiences.

My son, Nicholas, was d…

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NP Adult Gerontology, Haitian

May 30, 2017

I hope very much to be accepted to XXXX University not only because of its convenient location not that far from where I live and work in Massachusetts, but also the sheer excellence of your program and the sophisticated and comprehensive nature of your Adult Gerontology NP track, which I plan to co…

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MS Degree Program Nursing, Latino Community

November 21, 2014

The greatest strength of my application to your especially distinguished Masters Program in Nursing at the University of XXXX is undoubtedly the fact that I am not only a nurse, but that I am also fully bilingual and bicultural. I am a Mexican woman who is most fully dedicated to addressing the nurs…

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Undergraduate Nursing, BSN Degree, Career Change

November 21, 2014

Your especially distinguished nursing program at XXXX is my first choice for study towards the BSN degree for a variety of reasons, particularly your explicit focus on diverse student populations, which attracts me as Korean woman who adores diversity. At 32 years old, the decision to become a nurse…

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Entry Level MSN Program, Public Health, FNP

November 21, 2014

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make …

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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

November 21, 2014

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fat…

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DNP Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia DNP-NA

November 21, 2014

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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MSN Psychiatric Mental Health, Dementia

November 21, 2014

I was not looking forward to a rotation in a locked psychiatric ward during my BSN training, it was merely something to be endured in order to reach my goal of becoming a midwife.  I found the ward to be a disturbing environment but was filled with sympathy for the patients and curious about them as…

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MS Master´s Clinical Nurse Program, Indian

November 21, 2014

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys,…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

November 21, 2014

I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my fir…

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MSN Masters, FNP, Haiti Earthquake Volunteer

November 21, 2014

My intellectual, professional, and clinical interests are all a result of my intense passion for nursing, especially nursing education. I earned my AS Degree in Nursing in 2002 and just finished my BSN. I am especially highly motivated because of my fascination with research, in particular, the agin…

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GMSN Non-Traditional, Hospice, World Traveler

November 21, 2014

XXU is my first choice to study towards the MSN because I love the progressive aspects of your curriculum which mirror the creativity and sense of promise in diversity and humanity that generally characterizes the Bay Area. My academic work ethic is high as is demonstrated by my undergrad GPA of 3.7…

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PHD Doctor of Public Health Nursing, African

November 21, 2014

I am currently finishing up my Master’s Degree in our Nurse Practitioner Program at XXXX University. I have a special emphasis in my studies on adults, most particularly our geriatric population. My compassion for my patients, and the older they are the more that I love them, is matched only by my a…

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MSN, ANP, Cardiology, Russian Immigrant

November 21, 2014

I am a Russian woman from Latvia and a nurse who has now made her home in America. At 32, I feel strongly that I am now at my optimal point for a return to full time study in my field. My main area of interest is cardiology and I a looking for a way to give something back to my community in this are…

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MSN Public Health Education, African-American

November 21, 2014

I am a young woman who has recently finished my BSN. Half African-American and half Puerto Rican, I have celebrated multicultural diversity my entire life, especially since I was a military child and we moved around constantly. I completed my BS in Public Health at XXXX University in 2005 with a foc…

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BS Nursing, Chinese Immigrant

November 21, 2014

Seven years ago, I moved to America from China at the age of 15. Thus, my adulthood so far has been taken up by becoming a Chinese American rather than simply Chinese, and becoming a mother.  Now, I want very much to become a nurse.

I was not inspired to become a nurse until I saw all these nurs…

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DSN, Doctor of Science in Nursing, Latina Nurse

November 21, 2014

I am a woman of Puerto Rican ancestry who was born in New York. Since late adolescence, I have been dedicated to my career in nursing, completing both my BSN and my MSN at XXXX College. Now 41, I am a nurse who has time to develop a great deal of passion about patients, and to have strong feelings a…

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Masters FNP Multilingual, Russian, Spanish

November 21, 2014

My main goal in life is to make a positive difference in people’s lives by applying my significant nursing experience and to do so while having a satisfying and rewarding career which will provide both variety and autonomy. I am convinced that the FNP role will meet my requirements and maximize my a…

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MSN Education & Leadership, Africa

November 21, 2014

My goal in life is to make a positive difference in people’s lives and I seek to do so by applying my nursing experience while enjoying a satisfying and rewarding career which will provide both variety and autonomy. I am convinced that the FNP role will meet my requirements and maximize my ability t…

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Masters CRNA, Active US Air Force Reserve, ICU

November 21, 2014

I am an active US Air Force Reservist and, for the last four years, I have worked as a qualified flight nurse in an Air Force Aero-medical Evacuation Squadron. In my civil nursing career I have undertaken a very wide variety of roles since qualifying in 1996.  I now seek to apply and extend my signi…

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All of the samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and all are anonymous.

Add Me as a Contact on Skype! ID: DrRobertEdinger so that we can chat. Please note that I am not usually able to talk and I need your information in text form.

Let's be friends on Facebook!

Please note that I attend to my clients in the order in which I have received their payments. 

Consultations: drrobertedinger@gmail.com

Working together as a team we strive to create the best personal statement possible, to give you an advantage over other applicants to nursing school. I am an experienced professional who has read and edited thousands of  Personal Statements and Statements of Purpose. Most editing services only focus on the technical aspects of the statements: grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Instead, I consider the more important aspects; personal tone, flow, and content. Most importantly, I help you express your creative ideas with respect to your long term goals and your contribution to humanity and society. The final product of my editing may be the beginning of your professional success, a solid investment in your future.

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